Cluster 1: Writing to Speculate - Prompt "C"
Writing Sample #1 - Scoring "4"
The following writing sample for the Writing To Speculate Prompt "C" scored a "4" based on the New Jersey Registered Holistic Scoring Rubric.
Scorers made the following comments about the sample below:
This response has an opening and sequence of events that are connected. The writer takes compositional risk with the use of dialogue. There are consistent errors in mechanics; the lack of story development and elaboration of details keep this paper at the adequate level.
