HSPA Language Arts Tutorial
Cluster 2: Writing to Persuade
Writing
Sample Scoring "3"
The following writing
sample for the Sample Persuasive Writing
Prompt B scored a "3"
based on the New Jersey Registered Holistic Scoring Rubric.
Scorers made the following
comments about the sample below:
The sample
has a clear structure and ideas are well-developed, initially.
The sample begins to shift focus mid-way through and discusses
lateness, privacy, and weapons. There are a significant number
of spelling and apostrophe errors, and the point of view shifts.
There are also sentence mechanics errors, in particular, run-on
sentences.
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