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HSPA Language Arts Tutorial Cluster 3: Revising & Editing

Cluster Practice for Educators 


The "Revising and Editing" portion of the HSPA Language Arts test uses a sample student essay to assess student critical analysis and writing skills. 

For this assignment, you must complete two specific tasks related to preparing your students for the "Revising/Editing" portion of the HSPA:

  • Identify and summarize strategies for editing and revising both content and mechanics in a guide or checklist for your students- the guide should be based on the Revise/edit rubric
  • Create two practice essays to be revised/edited by your students to practice applying the strategies you identified

The following checklist will be used to score this Cluster 3 assignment:

  1. The essays created/selected are persuasive essays.

  2. The essays are ones which will appeal to a wide range of high school students.

  3. Practice prompt directions are clearly worded.

  4. The directions include a scoring rubric based on the HSPA holistic scoring rubric.

  5. Your prompt includes references to your strategies to be used to facilitate the creative writing process.

  6. A sample response to each prompt is included that adheres to a "high" score of 3 or 4 on the Revise/edit scoring rubric.


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