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HSPA Language Arts Tutorial Cluster 3: Revising & Editing

Sample 1 - Writing Sample Scoring "0"

The following  writing sample for the Revise/Edit prompt scored a "0" based on the Revising/Editing Scoring Rubric.  

Scorers made the following comments about the sample below:

This sample shows no evidence of attention to the opening or closing, nor does it address any of the mechanical or syntactic errors in the essay.

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