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HSPA Language Arts Tutorial Cluster 3: Revising & Editing

Sample 2 - Writing Sample Scoring "0"

The following  writing sample for the Revise/Edit prompt scored a "0" based on the Revising/Editing Scoring Rubric.  

Scorers made the following comments about the sample below:

This sample shows very little attention to sentence structure or the organization and development of ideas. Many errors were ignored.

 

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